Back on the beach
Sand between my toes Crashing waves to frolic in It's good to be back Okay folks, there's my haiku. I don't think it will win any awards or move anyone to tears, but writing in such a structured way can be fun from time to time. Now have your go at it. Any comments to this post should be posted in haiku format (5/7/5). Have fun! |
Wednesday November 15 2006 | File under: poetry, travel |
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on Wed 15th Nov, 2006 04:58 pm UTC Trista said: Well now, nice haiku. I just want to ask you this, Can you limerick? ************************ on Wed 15th Nov, 2006 08:04 pm UTC Saxtor said: Wren is on a beach. I'm behind an LCD. At least it's fall here. ************************ on Wed 15th Nov, 2006 09:31 pm UTC sweet julie said: working all nite sucks one diurnal creature, me whale season soon! ************************ on Wed 15th Nov, 2006 09:49 pm UTC Saxtor said: If you need line breaks Put this after your stanzas < br >, no spaces. ************************ on Wed 15th Nov, 2006 11:20 pm UTC nathan said: u r back so soon? anacortes or thailand? what will you do now? ************************ on Wed 15th Nov, 2006 11:22 pm UTC nathan said: btw, saxtor not sure bout u'r last stanza can u clarify? ************************ on Thu 16th Nov, 2006 04:40 am UTC Mom said: Here's some news from home. A storm knocked out the power. Candlelight haiku. ************************ on Thu 16th Nov, 2006 07:57 am UTC Horge said: Where are you now, Wren? Japan's famous for their haikus, But don't know their beaches. ************************ on Thu 16th Nov, 2006 01:04 pm UTC Wren said: I'm back in Thailand. What a funny thing to say This "back in Thailand" ************************ on Thu 16th Nov, 2006 01:09 pm UTC bob said: dude, wren, you appear to be pinching a fat loaf in your favicon ************************ on Thu 16th Nov, 2006 09:07 pm UTC jenelle said: i miss copious vitamin d synthesis mail me some, would you? ************************ on Thu 16th Nov, 2006 10:25 pm UTC Saxtor said: Consumer Alert: Counterfeit vitamin D direct from Thailand. ************************ on Fri 17th Nov, 2006 03:04 am UTC Andrew said: Comments? Comments? What? I will write no poetry, For your laziness! ************************ on Sat 18th Nov, 2006 04:59 am UTC trista said: big weekend for me shaved my legs, finished reading my legs feel naked. ************************ on Tue 11th Jan, 2011 09:09 am PST Aurora said: soaring my wings to the land of voodoo dreams travel tales to tell ************************ |
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